Look in detail at lines 6 to 14 of the source (as found on the June 2017 exam paper insert (opens in a new tab)).
Rosabel looked out of the windows; the street was blurred and misty, but light striking on the panes turned their dullness to opal and silver, and the jewellers' shops seen through this were fairy palaces. Her feet were horribly wet, and she knew the bottom of her skirt and petticoat would be coated with black, greasy mud. There was a sickening smell of warm humanity – it seemed to be oozing out of everybody in the bus – and everybody had the same expression, sitting so still, staring in front of them. Rosabel stirred suddenly and unfastened the two top buttons of her coat… she felt almost stifled. Through her half-closed eyes, the whole row of people on the opposite seat seemed to resolve into one meaningless, staring face. | |
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How does the writer use language here to describe Rosabel’s bus journey home?
You could include the writer’s choice of:
words and phrases
language features and techniques
sentence forms.
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