Look in detail at this extract (lines 7 to 12) from the (opens in a new tab)Practice Paper 1A source (opens in a new tab):
Then he touched a spring in the wall and slowly the panelling slid open, and behind it were the steel safes, five, no, six of them, all of burnished steel. He twisted a key; unlocked one; then another. Each was lined with a pad of deep crimson velvet; in each lay jewels — bracelets, necklaces, rings, tiaras, ducal coronets; loose stones in glass shells; rubies, emeralds, pearls, diamonds. All safe, shining, cool, yet burning, eternally, with their own compressed light. |
How does the writer use language here to convey Oliver Bacon’s views on jewels and the value of precious stones?
You could include the writer’s choice of:
words and phrases
language features and techniques
sentence forms.
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