The 16 Mark "How Far do you Agree" Question (Edexcel GCSE History): Revision Note

Exam code: 1HI0

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Summary of Question 5 or 6

  • You will choose either Question 5 or Question 6

  • Answering either question requires you to:

    • Make a clear, sustained judgement about a historical statement

    • Use second-order concepts such as cause, change, significance or consequence

    • Compare the given reason with other valid reasons

    • Reach a well-structured conclusion

  • From the 2025 exams onwards, the question will cover either a complete period or at least 200 years

Amount of marks 

16 + 4 SPaG marks

The time that you should spend on the question 

5 minutes of planning

20 minutes of writing

  • An example of the type of question you may encounter can be seen below:

Exam question paper with two options: one on migrant experiences in Britain since 1900 and the other on migration's impact on trade from 1500-1900. Each question is worth 20 marks.
An example of Question 5 and Question 6 in Paper 1
  • In previous years, this question has focused on the following topics in Migrants in Britain:

Year of Exam 

Question Topic 

2022 (opens in a new tab)

Question 5: The positive experiences of migrants, c1500–c1700

Question 6: The British Empire was the main reason for migration, c1700–c1900

2023 (opens in a new tab)

Question 5: Changes in British society were the main reason migration increased, c1500–c1900

Question 6: Migrants' impact on the economy, c1700–present

2024

Question 5: Migrants' impact on trade, c800–c1500

Question 6: Safety from religious persecution as a reason for migration, c1500–c1700

Making judgements in history

  • The 16-mark question requires you to weigh all the evidence and make a decision

    • Students often find this part the hardest to do 

Common mistakes in judgement questions

  • Explaining that all of the reasons are the most important 

  • Avoiding a clear decision by using phrases such as “kind of” or “maybe

  • Giving no opinion

  • Changing your argument halfway through

    • In the example question, you state that the government was the main reason migrant experiences changed

    • However, in the conclusion, you state that attitudes in society were the main reason

    • Doing this means that there is no sustained judgement, and you cannot access Level 4 (13–16 marks) 

What makes a good judgement?

  • Clearly answer the question clearly using second-order concepts

  • Acknowledge other sides of the argument

  • Have a consistent judgement from start to finish

  • Use your best evidence to back up your decision

    • There is no "right" or "wrong" answer in history

    • Consider other reasons

      • Even if you fully believe a reason is the most important, you still need to present evidence for other reasons

What makes a great conclusion in GCSE History?

  • Conclusions are usually where most of your judgement marks will be awarded

  • All great conclusions have these three elements:

    • Judgement — State your opinion using words from the question

    • Counter — Mention a reason from the other side

    • Support — Use your strongest evidence to explain why your side is more convincing

How to get SPaG marks

  • In Paper 1, students have access to an additional 4 marks for answering either Question 5 or Question 6

  • This is awarded for SPaG ( Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar)

SPaG mark

Reason for this mark

0

  • The student writes nothing

  • The student makes too many mistakes in spelling, grammar or content

1

  • The student has basic control over spelling and grammar

  • The student uses a limited range of specialist terms in their answer

2–3

  • The student spells and punctuates well

  • The student has good grammar

  • The student uses a good range of specialist terms

4

  • The student consistently spells and punctuates well

  • The student has excellent grammar

  • The student uses a wide range of specialist terms

Top tips for boosting SPaG marks

  • Spell historical terms correctly

  • Use paragraphs

  • Re-read your work to check punctuation

  • Reading the answer in your head

    • Where you would take a breath, make sure there is a comma or a full stop

How to answer a "How far do you agree?" question

  • In the exam, only answer either Question 5 or Question 6

    • You should put an "X" in the box next to the question you have chosen to answer

Form with instructions to mark a cross for the chosen question, either 5 or 6. A crossed box shows selection. A changed mind option is shown with a line through the cross of the previously chosen option and a new cross drawn in the other box.
An example of how to show which option you will be answering in the Migrants in Britain exam
  • You will receive two stimulus points

    • These are areas of knowledge to discuss in your question

    • If you only discuss these two stimulus points, you are limited to a maximum of 11 marks

    • You can choose not to use any of the suggestions

      • You can still achieve full marks by not using the two stimulus points

    • You must discuss three areas of knowledge in your answer to access Level 4

  • To answer this question successfully, you should:

    • Read the answer carefully and multiple times

    • Annotate the question to find the key demands of the question

    • Plan your answer, including:

      • What your judgement is

      • The key knowledge you wish to use

A brightly coloured revision flowchart helps students plan a 16-mark essay on the question: "Was the government the main reason for the change in migrant experiences?" The image is divided into several coloured boxes representing different parts of a spider diagram and essay structure.

Title (Pink):
Question: Was the government the main reason for the change in migrant experiences?

Planning a Question Using a Spider Diagram (Dark Pink Heading)
Peel 1 – Government was the main factor (Light Green):
The Race Relations Acts in 1965, 1968 and 1976 made it illegal to discriminate in public places, jobs and housing

The government took more responsibility for protecting migrants

Peel 2 – Government made migrant experience worse (Light Purple):
The Commonwealth Immigrants Acts (1962 and 1968) and the Immigration Act 1971 restricted entry

However, communities were already formed in Britain and remained strong

Central Red Box:
Restates essay question: Government the main reason for the change in migrant experiences

Peel 3 – Migrants (Orange):
Caribbean and Asian communities set up businesses, ran community events (e.g. Notting Hill Carnival) and used pardner schemes

Government actions allowed these communities to grow

Conclusion (Light Blue):
Overall, I mostly agree. The government’s actions set the legal framework that allowed improvements to happen
An illustration showing how to plan a 16-mark Migrants in Britain answer using a spider diagram
A revision planning table for a 16-mark GCSE History question titled:
“Was the government the main reason for the change in migrant experiences?”

The table is divided into four rows: Peel 1, Peel 2, Peel 3 and Conclusion. The top of the table has a heading in a pink box that reads:

Planning a question using a table

Peel 1:
Government was the main factor in changing migrant experiences.

Mentions Race Relations Acts (1965, 1968 and 1976), which made it illegal to discriminate in public places, jobs and housing

These laws made the government take more responsibility for protecting migrants and provided a framework for change

Peel 2:
Argues that the government also made migrant experiences worse:

Commonwealth Immigrants Acts (1962, 1968) and the Immigration Act 1971 restricted entry

These laws made it harder for people from the Commonwealth to enter Britain, increasing discrimination

However, strong migrant communities had already formed and remained active and resilient

Peel 3:
Migrants also helped improve their own experiences. Caribbean and Asian communities set up businesses, ran community events like Notting Hill Carnival and used pardner schemes:

These actions helped migrants feel supported

Government actions allowed these communities to grow

Conclusion:
Overall, I mostly agree. The actions of the government set the legal framework that allowed improvements to happen in migrant experiences
An illustration showing how to plan a 16-mark Migrants in Britain answer using a table

"How far do you agree?" question structure

  • Your answer should include:

    • A logical structure

    • A range of specific and relevant knowledge

    • An explanation of the second-order concept outlined in the question

    • A clear and sustained judgement throughout the answer

    • A conclusion

      • If you want to include an introduction, you can, but it is not necessary 

  • Your answers could be written in PEEL paragraphs: 

    • P — Make a point about the question

      • This should include your judgement 

    • E — Use evidence that supports the point that you have made (K)

      • Evidence needs to be relevant and specific to the question

    • E Explain why this evidence supports your point

      • Your explanation should be focused on the second-order concept outlined in the question (SOC)

    • L Link your explanation back to the question to help sustain your argument and show your understanding of the question

  • The question is out of 20 marks:

    • 6 marks for a wide range of specific knowledge of the period and the topic stated in the question (K)

    • 10 marks for the analysis of the key second-order concepts of cause and consequence, similarities and differences, and importance (SOC)

    • 4 marks are awarded for Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar (SPaG)

Worked example of a "How far do you agree?" question

Worked Example

  1. "The actions of the government were the main reason why the experiences of migrants in Britain changed in the years c1900 to the present."

 How far do you agree? Explain your answer.

(16 + 4SPaG)

You may use the following in your answer: 

  • The Race Relations Acts

  • Migration from the Commonwealth

You must also use information of your own.


Answer

I agree that government actions were a very important reason why migrant experiences changed from c1900 to the present. However, other reasons, such as the impact of migrant communities themselves and changing public attitudes, also played a key role.

One reason why the government changed migrant experiences was through laws such as the Race Relations Acts. These made it illegal to discriminate in public places (1965), at work (1968) and in housing (1976) (K). These laws aimed to improve the treatment of migrants and encourage a more equal society. They marked a turning point when the government took more responsibility for protecting migrants from unfair treatment. Therefore, although racism didn’t disappear, these laws changed the rights that migrants had in British society (SOC).

Another way the government shaped migrant experience was through controlling who could enter Britain. After lots of people came from the Commonwealth in the 1950s and 1960s, new laws such as the Commonwealth Immigrants Acts (1962 and 1968) and the Immigration Act 1971 made it harder for non-white migrants to settle in Britain (K). These laws were a response to pressure from some British people and showed that government actions could also make migrant experiences harder. However, migration laws before the 1960s had accepted migrants into British society, allowing communities to thrive. This meant that, despite these actions, migrant experiences were still improving due to these strong communities (SOC).

However, the experiences of migrants also changed because of the efforts made by migrants themselves. Caribbean and Asian migrants built strong communities, set up businesses, supported each other with "pardner" schemes and organised cultural events such as the Notting Hill Carnival (K). These actions helped migrants feel safer and more connected in Britain. Over time, these communities helped change the image of migrants and contributed to British culture. However, government actions in the 1940s and 1950s allowed these communities to establish themselves in Britain, creating the foundations for them to grow (SOC).

Overall, I mostly agree that the actions of the government were a major reason why migrant experiences changed, and the government caused change by passing important laws that improved rights and protection (SOC). Although migrant communities played a big role by creating support networks, organising events and helping to change attitudes, the government’s actions had the biggest impact. Laws such as the Race Relations Acts made it illegal to discriminate and gave migrants proper rights for the first time. This shows how government actions were the key cause of change (SOC).

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Expertise: History Content Creator

Zoe has worked in education for 10 years as a teaching assistant and a teacher. This has given her an in-depth perspective on how to support all learners to achieve to the best of their ability. She has been the Lead of Key Stage 4 History, showing her expertise in the Edexcel GCSE syllabus and how best to revise. Ever since she was a child, Zoe has been passionate about history. She believes now, more than ever, the study of history is vital to explaining the ever-changing world around us. Zoe’s focus is to create accessible content that breaks down key historical concepts and themes to achieve GCSE success.

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