A student has answered the following AQA English Language exam question:
Paper 2, Q5: 'People protest about the cruelty of keeping animals in captivity, but they seem happy enough to eat meat, keep pets and visit zoos. All animals should be free!' |
Alison’s answer: My view is that zoos should be shut down and people banned from having pets.
What has Alison done well in this sentence?
They have softened their language to avoid putting readers off.
They have stated their viewpoint to make their position clear.
They have used technical vocabulary to add credibility to their argument.
They have used appropriate humour to engage the audience.
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