'Trio' (SQA National 5 English): Revision Note
Exam code: X824 75
Below is a guide to Edwin Morgan’s poem ‘Trio’ in preparation for the SQA National 5 English exam. It includes:
Overview: a breakdown of the poem, including its possible meanings and interpretations
Writer’s methods: an exploration of Morgan’s techniques and methods
Understanding the poem: an exploration of the themes and ideas within Morgan’s poem
Linking the poems: an understanding of how ‘Trio’ connects to Morgan’s other prescribed poems for the Scottish text section
Overview
In order to answer questions on any poem, it is vital that you understand what it is about. This section includes:
An overview of the poem
A ‘translation’ of the poem, section-by-section
A commentary of each of these sections, outlining Edwin Morgan’s intention and message
‘Trio’ overview
‘Trio’, written by the poet Edwin Morgan, is a celebration of the vitality and joy of three people described by a speaker in central Glasgow. Morgan uses the characters to further present what he deems to be the true meaning of Christmas.
‘Trio’ translation
Lines 1-2
“Coming up Buchanan Street, quickly, on a sharp winter evening
a young man and two girls, under the Christmas lights — ”
Translation
The poem begins in the present, in medias res (opens in a new tab), with the speaker describing three people on Buchanan Street in Glasgow
The characters are a male and two females, and the time of year is Christmas
Morgan’s intention
The setting, “Buchanan Street”, is one of Glasgow’s main shopping streets, adding a sense of reality to the events that follow
The word “quickly” immediately establishes a sense of pace and liveliness in the poem
Despite the season being “winter”, the word “sharp” has connotations (opens in a new tab) of conditions that are refreshing and life-affirming
The characters who are introduced in line 2, “a young man and two girls” are unnamed and therefore carry a universal appeal
Lines 3-5
“The young man carries a new guitar in his arms,
the girl on the inside carries a very young baby
and the girl on the outside carries a chihuahua.”
Translation
The speaker offers each character a line of introduction
Importantly, they are each described as holding different items: a guitar, a baby, and a dog
Morgan’s intention
By using three separate lines to introduce the three characters, the speaker identifies the group as a united trio who also have distinct differences
The word “carries” is repeated to highlight the importance of their cargo:
The “guitar” represents the joy and harmony music offers
The “baby” symbolises the preciousness of new life
The “chihuahua” represents something cute and novel
Together, the group are bearing gifts in the same way the Three Wise Men offered gifts upon the birth of Jesus, thus linking with the theme of Christmas
Lines 6-8
“And the three of them are laughing, their breath rises
in a cloud of happiness, and as they pass
the boy says, ‘Wait till he sees this but!’”
Translation
As the trio continue along the road, the speaker describes the joy implicit in their movements, actions and words
Morgan’s Intention
The use of “the three of them” once again unites the trio
Their collective joy is reinforced by “laughing” and “cloud of happiness”
The boy’s dialogue (opens in a new tab) emphasises how much he looks forward to offering a gift
In this context, the word “but” in the Glaswegian dialect means “though”:
The use of dialect adds authenticity and personality to the speaker and event
Lines 9-11
“The Chihuahua has a tiny Royal Stewart tartan coat like a tea pot-
holder,
the baby in its white shawl is all bright eyes and mouth like favours
in a fresh sweet cake,
the guitar swells out under its milky plastic cover, tied at the neck
with silver tinsel tape and a brisk sprig of mistletoe.”
Translation
Here, the focus switches to the three items first described in lines 3-5
In turn, they are described in great detail to emphasise their vibrancy
Morgan’s intention
Firstly, the small dog is presented as sweet and cute, dressed in a “tartan coat” that is compared, using a simile (opens in a new tab), to a “tea pot-holder”:
The image puts the attention on something that is both fun and memorable
Secondly, the baby is described as being in “white”, a reference to its symbolic (opens in a new tab) innocence, while its “bright” eyes suggest its attentive nature and willingness to engage with the world:
Another simile is used, comparing the baby’s expression to “favours in a cake”
Just as “favours” are seen as treats, so too does the baby bring joy to the lives of others
Thirdly, the guitar is presented as immaculately wrapped, suggesting great care has gone into preparing the gift:
Like the baby dressed in “white”, the reference to “milky” suggests innocence, while the use of “brisk” to describe the "mistletoe" suggests vitality
Together, by presenting the three images as wrapped, the speaker highlights the precious nature of the gifts
Lines 12-15
“Orphean sprig! Melting baby! Warm chihuahua!
The vale of tears is powerless before you.
Whether Christ is born, or is not born, you
put paid to fate, it abdicates
under the Christmas lights.”
Translation
Inspired by the trio carrying presents, the speaker makes short statements on each
“Orphean” relates to Orpheus, a poet and musician of Greek mythology, who could charm all living things with his music
The next lines offer a reflection on the experience, with the speaker questioning the meaning of Christmas
Morgan’s intention
The “vale of tears” is a biblical allusion (opens in a new tab), referring to a symbolically hard, sorrowful place:
However, in this context the “vale of tears” is “powerless”, and so stripped of strength or influence
The repetition (opens in a new tab) of “you” emphasises the universal nature of the poet’s message
Line 14 also suggests the debate over the birth of Christ is irrelevant:
What matters most is the protective power of “the Christmas lights” and the symbolism they possess
The break in line 15 emphasises the notion of “abdicates”:
Just as the line is broken, so too is “fate” defeated
Lines 16-18
“Monsters of the year
go blank, are scattered back,
can’t bear this march of three.”
Translation
The speaker’s message becomes increasingly optimistic, focusing on how evil cannot conquer the joy experienced by the trio
Morgan’s intention
A tricolon (“go blank”, “scattered back”, “march of three”) emphasises a three-pronged assault on life’s problems and negativity
The word “Monsters”, suggesting something evil with bad intentions, is used to contrast the positive, united qualities of the “march of three”
Lines 19-23
“- And the three have passed, vanished in the crowd
(yet not vanished, for their arms they wind
the life of men and beasts, and music,
laughter ringing them round like a guard)
at the end of this winter’s day.”
Translation
The hyphen indicates a movement in time:
However, despite the physical absence of the trio, their influence is sustained
Morgan’s intention
The word choice of “vanished” suggests the magical, ethereal presence of the trio:
However, their influence remains, symbolised by their gifts
The tricolon “of men and beasts
, and music” relates to the gifts carried by the trio
The sound of “laughter ringing them round like a guard” refers back to the idea of the protective power of the trio
The poem concludes hopefully, with the “end” of something being heralded as a symbolic opportunity for a fresh beginning
Writer’s methods
Although this section is organised into three separate sections — form, structure and language — it is always best to move from what the poet is presenting (the techniques they use; the overall form of the poem; what comes at the beginning, middle and end of a poem) to how and why they have made the choices they have.
Focusing on the poet’s overarching ideas, rather than individual poetic techniques, will gain you far more marks. Crucially, in the below sections, all analysis is arranged by theme and includes Edwin Morgan’s intentions behind his choices in terms of:
Form
Structure
Language
Form
Edwin Morgan’s poem is a monologue (opens in a new tab) describing the experience of seeing three people walking along Buchanan Street in Glasgow, each carrying a gift. The poem offers hope amid a winter-time context.
Theme | Evidence | Poet’s intention |
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Hope | Through a monologue, Morgan is able to use the awe of the speaker to explore the theme of hope. Morgan uses the observation of three people carrying items that are all gifts in their own way, as they navigate a busy Glasgow street. | By presenting the reader with a simple, relatable setting, Morgan suggests that hope can be found in everyday experiences and encounters, and that there is joy to be found in a human world that can sometimes seem dark and depressing. |
Structure
The use of free verse (opens in a new tab) and the present tense gives a sense of both reality and immediacy to the poem, enabling Morgan to fully explore the immense power of human nature as a force for good.
Theme | Evidence | Poet’s intention |
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Celebration of human nature | ‘Trio’ is written in free verse without rhyme or rhythm, utilising a range of line lengths for emphasis:
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The use of the present tense gives a sense of this experience being a live event, adding tension and drama. | The final lines are dominated by parenthesis, with the speaker quickly moving from idea to idea:
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The final stanza reverts from the present, offering a reflective stance that suggests the long-lasting impact of this experience. |
Language
Edwin Morgan uses vivid word choice and imagery (opens in a new tab) to elevate what seems to be an ordinary event, turning it into something meaningful.
Theme | Evidence | Poet’s intention |
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Finding joy and happiness in an ordinary context | Word choice is used to explore the simple event of three people walking down a Glasgow street:
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Imagery is also used to elevate the experience described by the speaker:
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Understanding the poem
For the SQA National 5 English exam, it’s important to show a clear and thoughtful understanding of the poem’s themes and main ideas, as well as how the poet’s techniques and intentions help to convey meaning. This section focuses on two main themes that Morgan examines in ‘Trio’:
Celebration of human nature
Optimism
Celebration of human nature
At its heart, ‘Trio’ is a poem that celebrates the best qualities of human nature
The setting is meant to represent a typical street in Glasgow:
Morgan uses a real place to offer a sense of authenticity, making events seem more emotional as a result
The three ordinary people exude joy and warmth, as symbolised by the objects they carry:
Their joy is not reserved to themselves, but is infectious and lasts beyond their physical presence
The poem is also set at Christmas-time, offering an important reminder:
Regardless of your religious beliefs, Christmas is a period that symbolises the generous nature of the human spirit
Optimism
Despite the “sharp winter setting”, Morgan’s poem is relentlessly optimistic in its tone and ideas
This is most clearly represented in the biblical reference to the “vale of tears”: this notion of misery is comprehensively countered by the optimism of the trio:
Such is the power of their joy and happiness, such negativity “abdicates” (or is redundant) in the optimistic face of the sparkling “Christmas lights”
The optimism continues to destroy pessimism, with the “Monsters” defeated by the united stance (“this march”) of the trio
Finally, even when the group have moved on from Buchanan Street, their influence is perpetual:
This ends the poem on an optimistic, uplifting tone that even a “winter’s day” cannot dampen
Examiner Tips and Tricks
Unlike longer prose or drama texts, where a line-by-line examination is often inappropriate, for a Scottish poem it is entirely reasonable and effective to carry out a line-by-line examination of significant aspects.
When analysing a poem, you should focus your attention on specific linguistic features such as:
Word choice and metaphor
Sound techniques (such as rhythm, rhyme or alliteration)
How the poet achieves a particular mood, effect or atmosphere
Linking the poems
Students often use Edwin Morgan’s poetry to answer the Scottish texts section of the SQA National 5 Critical Reading exam. If you choose, though, you can write your critical essay question on Morgan’s poetry instead.
If you decide to write about Morgan for the Scottish text section, the final question asks you to demonstrate a wider understanding of his poetry. This means linking more than one poem together by focusing on his ideas and how he communicates them (his techniques).
The six Edwin Morgan poems on the SQA syllabus are:
‘In the Snack-bar’
‘Trio’
‘Strawberries’
‘Love’
‘Glasgow Sonnet (i)’
‘Death in Duke Street’
Here are some parallels between the six poems, organised by shared themes:
Theme: Exploration of human nature | |||||
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‘In the Snack-bar’ | ‘Trio’ | ‘Strawberries’ | ‘Love’ | ‘Glasgow Sonnet i’ | ‘Death in Duke Street’ |
Exploration of empathy for a man struggling with old age and disability | Presentation of the best qualities of human nature, despite the ordinary setting | Intense human connection explored through the memory of a singular moment | Human nature explored through our capacity to love intensely | The better qualities of human nature are absent, with the tenement and its inhabitants presented as desperate, depressing and hopeless | The instinctive goodness in human nature is explored through the responses of unwitting bystanders, and also the bravery of the dying man |
Theme: Hope | |||||
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‘In the Snack-bar’ | ‘Trio’ | ‘Strawberries’ | ‘Love’ | ‘Glasgow Sonnet i’ | ‘Death in Duke Street’ |
The poem offers a hopeful message about the compassion of humans, explored through the support of the narrator to an old, disabled man | ‘Trio’ is imbued with a sense of hope, mainly the hope that humans can counter negativity and darkness with kindness and generosity | Through the memory of a vivid experience, the poem recounts an event that brings hope to the narrator about the long-lasting impact of love | Despite its dangers and enigmatic qualities, the poem offers hope for a happier, more fulfilling existence with love in it | The setting, characters and ideas of social decay suggest an absence of any hope or reason to exist | The poem offers hope for humanity as unlikely strangers come to the aid of a collapsed man |
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