Common Reflection Mistakes (DP IB Creativity, Activity, Service): Revision Note

Dr Dean West

Written by: Dr Dean West

Reviewed by: Alistair Marjot

Updated on

What common mistakes should students avoid in CAS reflections?

Prioritising description over analysis

  • Providing only a summary—a brief statement of the main points of what occurred

  • Recording events without including an analysis

  • Failing to explore why an experience mattered or what it reveals about the student or the world

  • Writing reflections that are "predictable" or follow a formula rather than being honest and personal

Neglecting feelings and personal growth

  • Ignoring how the experience relates to moods, feelings and emotional responses

  • Omitting evidence of growth (i.e. the development of new skills or a positive change in a student's perspective)

  • Treating reflection as a "waste of time" rather than a tool for building self-awareness

  • Forgetting to mention the challenges

Issues with timing and intent

  • Leaving reflections until too late in the 18-month CAS journey

  • Creating "forced" reflections—entries written only to satisfy a requirement rather than out of genuine insight

  • Treating CAS as a "tick-box" exercise—an attitude where students do the bare minimum to fulfill a requirement without real commitment

  • Reflecting just to "please someone else"—writing what the student thinks the CAS coordinator wants to hear

Missing connections to Learning Outcomes

  • Failing to link reflections to the seven learning outcomes

  • Providing evidence that is too vague to prove an outcome was met

  • This will greatly reduce your ability to demonstrate your achievements during the final CAS interview

Examiner Tips and Tricks

When linking to learning outcomes, be specific. Name the outcome, describe the exact evidence from your experience, and explain what you learned or how you changed—avoid vague claims like “I improved teamwork.

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Dr Dean West

Author: Dr Dean West

Expertise: Content Writer

Dr Dean West is a UK-based educator, Principal Examiner and assessment specialist. He leads IB CAS and the Extended Essay at Bromsgrove School, where he also coordinates and teaches IB Business Management. A Chartered Teacher and Chartered Educational Assessor, he has examined for WJEC, Cambridge International and Edexcel, consulted for Ofqual and the British Council. He holds a PhD in Education from the University of Warwick.

Alistair Marjot

Reviewer: Alistair Marjot

Expertise: Environmental Systems and Societies & Biology Content Creator

Alistair graduated from Oxford University with a degree in Biological Sciences. He has taught GCSE/IGCSE Biology, as well as Biology and Environmental Systems & Societies for the International Baccalaureate Diploma Programme. While teaching in Oxford, Alistair completed his MA Education as Head of Department for Environmental Systems & Societies. Alistair has continued to pursue his interests in ecology and environmental science, recently gaining an MSc in Wildlife Biology & Conservation with Edinburgh Napier University.