How to Answer a 12 mark 'Evaluate' Question (AQA GCSE Religious Studies A): Revision Note

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How to answer 12-mark 'Evaluate' questions

  • Every topic ends with a 12-mark "Evaluate this statement" question, worth up to 15 marks

    • The 15 marks is 12 marks for the content of the answer and 3 marks for SPaG (spelling, punctuation and grammar — assessed only on this question)

    • Unlike the "Explain" questions, this one is not point-marked — it's marked using levels of response

    • It is the only question on the paper testing AO2 (evaluation), rather than AO1 (knowledge)

What the question requires

  • Every 12-mark question gives you the same four instructions:

    • Refer to religious teaching

    • Give reasoned arguments to support the statement

    • Give reasoned arguments to support a different point of view

    • Reach a justified conclusion

Command word and assessment objectives

  • The question uses the command word 'evaluate'

  • This means your answer must:

    • Consider different viewpoints

    • Weigh up evidence for and against a statement

    • Arrive at a reasoned, justified conclusion

  • You must present balanced arguments (reasons to agree and disagree) supported by religious evidence

  • The question only examines one assessment objective AO2

    • Analyse and evaluate aspects of religion and belief, focusing on significance, influence, and balanced, reasoned arguments with justified conclusions

How it's marked: levels of response

  • The examiner reads your whole answer and decides which level it best fits, then places it within that level's mark range

  • Within a level examiners award:

    • The top mark if your answer convincingly meets the level statement

    • The middle mark if it adequately meets it

    • The bottom mark if it just meets it

Level 4 (10-12 marks)

  • A well-argued response, reasoned consideration of different points of view

  • Logical chains of reasoning leading to judgement(s) supported by knowledge and understanding of relevant evidence and information

  • References to religion applied to the issue

Level 3 (7-9 marks)

  • Reasoned consideration of different points of view

  • Logical chains of reasoning that draw on knowledge and understanding of relevant evidence and information

  • Clear reference to religion

Level 2 (4-6 marks)

  • Reasoned consideration of a point of view, OR recognition of different points of view each supported by relevant reasons/evidence

  • Maximum Level 2 if there is no reference to religion

Level 1 (1-2 marks)

  • Point of view with reason(s) stated in support

The single most important rule on this question: if there is no reference to religion in your answer the maximum marks are Level 2 (6 marks), no matter how well-argued your answer is otherwise

What is a "logical chain of reasoning"?

  • This phrase appears in every level from 2 upwards, but it's rarely explained

  • It is the single biggest gap between a Level 2 answer and a Level 4 one

  • A chain of reasoning is a sequence of linked sentences, where each one builds on the last, rather than a list of separate points sitting side by side

  • A useful scaffold:

    • Point → "This is because…" → "This suggests/means that…"

  • Each link should add something the previous sentence didn't say

    • If your next sentence could be deleted without losing meaning, it isn't part of the chain, it's padding.

Weak: A list, not a chain (30 words)

Some Christians would agree with this statement. Suffering is bad and God is supposed to be loving. Other Christians would disagree because of free will. God gave humans free will.

  • This states a position and gestures at a reason, but never explains why the reason supports the point, or what it means for the question

    • It would sit at Level 1–2.

Strong: An actual chain (69 words)

Some Christians would agree with this statement. This is because if God is truly loving, it seems difficult to explain why he would allow innocent people, especially children, to suffer illnesses they did nothing to deserve. This suggests that either God lacks the power to stop suffering, or chooses not to use it, which challenges the traditional belief that God is both omnipotent and loving at the same time.

  • Notice the difference: point → reason → implication

  • Each sentence forces the next, "why?", then "so what does that mean?", instead of jumping to a new, disconnected idea

  • This is what "logical chains of reasoning leading to judgement(s)" actually looks like in practice

How to answer a 12-mark question

Step 1

  • Read the statement and identify what's actually being evaluated

  • Underline the specific claim in the statement, not the general topic

    • "God cannot be all-loving because evil and suffering exist." is a claim about the compatibility of God's love with suffering, not a general essay prompt about "suffering."

Step 2

  • Spend 30 seconds jotting: one argument for, one argument against, the religious teaching for each, and your likely conclusion

  • A planned answer reaches a genuine judgement far more reliably than one written straight off the top of your head

Step 3

  • For every point: state it, give your reason, then explain what that reason implies for the question

  • Don't move to your next point until the current one is fully linked through

Step 4

  • Write a conclusion that judges, not just summarises

  • "Some people think X, others think Y" is not a conclusion, it is a restatement

    • A justified conclusion says which argument is stronger, chained back to a reason why.

How to structure a 12 mark answer

  • Arguments in support of the statement, with religious reasoning

  • Arguments for a different point of view, with religious reasoning

  • A conclusion that reaches a justified judgement

    • This should be more than "some people think X and others think Y," but your own reasoned view on which is stronger and why

Worked Example

God cannot be all-loving because evil and suffering exist.’

Evaluate this statement.

In your answer you should:

• refer to Christian teaching

• give reasoned arguments to support this statement

• give reasoned arguments to support a different point of view

• reach a justified conclusion.

[12] + [SPaG 3]

Answer

Some Christians would agree with this statement because Christianity teaches that God is all-loving (omnibenevolent). A loving God would surely want to stop all suffering. They also believe that God is omnipotent or all-powerful and therefore has the power to stop suffering. Therefore suffering should not exist . Because it does, logically God cannot be all-loving.

Some people might argue that this only applies to natural evil. However, this would not make sense because God as the Creator would know the weaknesses of the people he created. Therefore he would be able to end moral evil and stop suffering from this too. This applies not only to this life but also the afterlife. The parable of the Sheep and the Goats shows that hell is real and that the punishment for evil is not only suffering in this life but in the afterlife as well. Surely a loving God would not allow people to suffer after they die? Therefore it is fair to say that the existence of evil proves that God is not really all-loving.

Some Christians might say that evil and suffering exists not because God is not loving, but because he is not omnipotent and so is powerless to prevent evil . Other Christians would say that God is all-loving and that this is not disproved by the existence of evil and suffering. Humans were created with free will. This means they are responsible for their own actions towards others. A lot of the evil and suffering in the world is actually caused by moral evil: people use their free will to harm others and cause suffering. This has been true ever since Adam and Eve disobeyed God in the Garden of Eden in Genesis. It is not fair to blame God or say God is not all-loving when it is humans’ responsibility to make better choices. If you took away this responsibility you would be taking away the free will of human beings .

Some Christians see suffering as a test of faith, because the letter of James says that ‘the testing of your faith produces perseverance.’ It is not appropriate to question whether God is all-loving, because that would go against the teachings of the religion.

Overall, I disagree with the statement that God cannot be all-loving because evil and suffering exist. It is fair to attribute most evil and suffering down to the behaviour of people. Even some natural disasters can be traced to human misuse of the planet’s resources. If someone is a Christian they would have to believe that God is all-loving, because otherwise, why worship him at all? If there is a God, he must be benevolent.

Marking guidance

  • This is a 'level of response' answer

    • Each point made in the answer does not equal a mark. 

Common errors 

The following errors mean that answers cannot achieve Level 4 (top marks):

  • No reference to religion (maximum of 6 marks at Level 2).

  • No reasoned comparison between viewpoints (maximum of 6 marks at Level 2)

  • Reference made to religion but not applied to the issue (maximum of 9 marks, Level 3).

  • There is no judgement about whether the existence of evil disproves God’s benevolence.

Alternative content

The answer above is just one example of a response to this question. Other information that could be used in the answer includes:

  • Why would a loving God allow the sheer scale of suffering?

  • The atonement brought by Jesus.

  • Prayer in response to suffering - Parable of the Unjust Judge (Luke 18).

  • Eternal reward for suffering in this life.

  • The importance of the Christian response to suffering (Book of Job).

Examiner Tips and Tricks

At roughly a minute per mark, you have 12–15 minutes for this question, including planning — long enough for a short plan, not a full essay draft. Spend 30 seconds jotting one supporting point, one opposing point, and your likely conclusion before you start writing; a planned answer reaches a genuine Level 4 judgement far more often than one written straight off the top of your head. Remember: SPaG is only assessed here, so it's worth taking a little extra care with your final paragraph.

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Bridgette Barrett

Author: Bridgette Barrett

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After graduating with a degree in Geography, Bridgette completed a PGCE over 30 years ago. She later gained an MA Learning, Technology and Education from the University of Nottingham focussing on online learning. At a time when the study of geography has never been more important, Bridgette is passionate about creating content which supports students in achieving their potential in geography and builds their confidence.

Alistair Marjot

Reviewer: Alistair Marjot

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Alistair graduated from Oxford University with a degree in Biological Sciences. He has taught GCSE/IGCSE Biology, as well as Biology and Environmental Systems & Societies for the International Baccalaureate Diploma Programme. While teaching in Oxford, Alistair completed his MA Education as Head of Department for Environmental Systems & Societies. Alistair has continued to pursue his interests in ecology and environmental science, recently gaining an MSc in Wildlife Biology & Conservation with Edinburgh Napier University.