Pygmalion’s Bride (DP IB English A: Language and Literature: HL): Revision Note

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This study guide to Carol Ann Duffy’s poem ‘Pygmalion’s Bride’ contains:

  • Overview

  • Authorial purpose

  • Authorial choices and textual features

  • Themes

  • Connections to other Duffy poems

Overview

  • The poem was first published in 1999 in the collection The World’s Wife

  • The collection consists of poems from the perspectives of women connected to, or reimagined from, famous men in myth, history, literature, film and popular culture

  • Duffy offers a retelling of their experiences to challenge the dominant male perspective

  • Pygmalion's Bride is a retelling of a myth from Ovid's Metamorphoses (Book 10), a Roman poetic retelling of a Greek myth set in Cyprus:

    • In the original myth, the sculptor Pygmalion fell in love with his statue, whom he named Galatea

    • Aphrodite granted his wish to bring Galatea to life and he married his statue-bride

  • Duffy retells the story from Galatea’s perspective

Authorial purpose

  • Duffy’s aim with the collection is to challenge dominant male perspectives and narratives

  • She offers multiple and complex versions of womanhood

  • In ‘Pygmalion’s Bride’, the myth becomes an extended metaphor for toxic power dynamics in relationships between men and women:

    • Galatea feigns indifference in the hope that it will deter Pygmalion’s advances

    • But Pygmalion is attracted to his bride’s passivity, as he can use her as he wishes

    • When she feigns interest, enjoyment and agency, he appears to lose interest and discards her

Authorial choices and textual features

Form 

  • ‘Pygmalion’s Bride’ is a free verse poem:

    • The lack of a regular rhyme scheme makes the poem feel conversational and intimate

    • It reads like a personal account

  • It has seven irregular-length stanzas:

    • The last stanza is two lines

    • It reads like a punchline

  • The poem is a dramatic monologue giving voice and perspective to Galatea

Structure

  • The title alludes to the figure in Greek mythology:

    • The whole poem can be read as a reinterpretation of the original myth from Galatea’s perspective

    • Or it could be a contemporary speaker using the mythical figures as metaphors for current issues

  • Caesura emphasises the contrast between the speaker and the sculptor

Language

  • Pygmalion can be read as an extended metaphor for male desire to dominate:

    • Accordingly, Galatea can be read as an extended metaphor for women who must navigate issues of dominance, consent and agency

  • The speaker uses imagery (opens in a new tab)and similes to describe herself as dissociated from the sculptor’s advances:

    • The semantic field of coldness and purity emphasises this

  • Colloquial expressions place the speaker in a modern context:

    • Duffy plays with time and place to highlight the longevity of problematic power dynamics in patriarchal societies

  • Connotation and juxtaposition combine to emphasise the sculptor’s aggression and Galatea’s repulsion

  • Duffy uses alliteration, sibilance (opens in a new tab)and assonance to convey contrasting behaviours and attitudes

Examiner Tips and Tricks

Using subject-specific terminology in naming textual features is a useful way to meet strands of Criterion D, Language. Linking these named features to specific impacts on the reader is a good way to meet Criterion B. Linking this analysis of named textual features to broader thematic and contextual knowledge is a good way to meet Criterion A.

Themes

Objectification of women

Duffy’s work can be read in the context of ideas associated with third-wave feminism (see more in Contextual Understanding), which was concerned with challenging sexual power dynamics, assault, abuse and taboos around female desire. In the poem, Galatea’s lack of consent aligns the ‘seduction’ with rape. Her disassociation and attempts to remove herself from Pygmalion’s caresses echo narratives often associated with rape victims. Pygmalion’s increased attraction to her passivity and his desire to harm her highlight a toxic male desire that objectifies women and is attracted to them at best as objects and at worst as victims of their control. Galatea manipulates this by feigning desire and agency in order to repulse Pygmalion. She plays on objectification by understanding that by refusing to be an object, she is no longer desirable. Duffy prompts us to reflect on how embedded layers of these dynamics are in our relationships.

Theme 

Quotation

Analysis and interpretation

Objectification of women

‘Cold, I was, like snow, like ivory./ I thought "He will not touch me",/ but he did.’

  • The speaker describes herself with similes that emphasise her purity and remove

  • The caesura marks a jarring contrast between her thoughts and his actions:

    • Duffy hints here at a lack of consent 

‘He kissed my stone-cool lips./ I lay still/ as though I'd died./ He stayed.

He thumbed my marbled eyes.’

  • The disturbing imagery here contrasts her stillness with his persistent touching:

    • The metaphor of ‘stone-cold lips’ and the simile of ‘as though I’d died’ extend the metaphor of the assaulted woman dissociating and playing dead

‘He brought me presents, polished pebbles,/ little bells./ I didn't blink,/

was dumb./ He brought me pearls and necklaces and rings./ He called them girly things.’

  • The speaker describes how Pygmalion tries to decorate her and charm her with jewellery:

    • The alliteration in ‘presents, polished pebbles’ and ‘bells’ and ‘blink’ makes the gifts seem cold and hard

    • The polysyndeton in ‘pearls and necklaces and rings’ emphasises the quantity of gifts

    • The short line and connotation of ‘girly’ adds a mocking tone, conveying Galatea’s dismissal of his pathetic overtures to dress her like a doll

‘He ran his clammy hands along my limbs./ I didn't shrink,/ played statue, shtum.’

  • Pygmalion’s actions are conveyed with language that connotes aggression and creepiness:

    • ‘Clammy hands’ is sensory imagery that evokes repulsion

  • The stillness of the speaker is in constant contrast to his actions: 

    • The sibilance in ‘shrink’, ‘statue’, ‘shtum’ adds a silence and stillness to her

    • The colloquial ‘shtum’ places the speaker in a contemporary context

‘he squeezed, he pressed./ I would not bruise./ He looked for marks,/ for purple hearts,/ for inky stars, for smudgy clues./

His nails were claws./ I showed no scratch, no scrape, no scar.’

  • Duffy pushes the poem beyond passive objectification and into violent assault

  • Pygmalion's actions become more aggressive

  • The anaphora and listing of the ‘for marks, for purple hearts, for inky stars, for smudgy clues’ give an image of a bruised body:

    • Galatea implies that he would be aroused by her bruised body

    • The poetic language and metaphorical imagery suggest he finds beauty in violence

  • The next listing, ‘no scratch, no scrape, no scar’, echoes the previous list in contrast with simple, straightforward language:

    • She refuses to become his victim

‘My heart was ice, was glass./ His voice was gravel, hoarse.’

  • Again, the speaker and sculptor are juxtaposed

    • The metaphors for her convey cleanliness, coldness and stillness

    • The metaphors for him convey harshness

‘So I changed tack,/ grew warm, like candle wax,

kissed back,’

  • The volta in the simple ‘so’ and colloquial ‘changed tack’ belies a momentous change

  • The speaker realises his attraction to her as an object:

    • She refuses to be still any longer

  • The simile of candle wax is in contrast to the cold, hard materials of earlier: glass, ice and stone

‘begged for his child,/

and at the climax/ screamed my head off -/ all an act.’

  • The speaker narrates her performance

  • Her (feigned) desire, eroticism and hope for a child are repulsive to him

  • Duffy skewers the objectification of women by showing his supposed love for Galatea to be empty

  • The caesura and colloquial language of ‘- / all an act’ convey Galatea’s control and determination

‘And haven't seen him since./ Simple as that’

  • The two-line close to the poem reads like a punchline

  • The lack of punctuation suggests Galatea’s story continues without Pygmalion

Connections to other Duffy poems

When studying Duffy’s poetry, it is important to make connections across her work, as many poems explore similar ideas through different speakers and situations.

Power

Duffy explores the power dynamics embedded in patriarchal norms and the culture that comes from them. She seeks to overthrow or at least prompt us to challenge them by offering alternative, female-based perspectives on well-known tales. Here, she examines the power of the speaker to manipulate male desire for passivity. The speaker refuses to be an object, and in overthrowing this role, she reclaims her independence.   

‘Mrs Midas’

‘Little Red Cap’

‘Mrs Faust’

  • Here, Duffy examines how the speaker takes control of a situation after being ignored previously

  • In reclaiming her power, the speaker banishes her husband and the selfish greed he represents

  • Duffy presents the intense perspective of a woman consumed by betrayal

  • The speaker’s voice is emotional and fragmented, reflecting her anger and bitterness 

  • This distorted perspective allows the reader to experience the depth of her emotional devastation

  • The speaker wins out over her greedy husband and the devil himself

  • She has an understanding of power dynamics

  • She successfully forges her own path of success

Sources:

Duffy, C.A. (1999) The World’s Wife. London: Picador.


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