Pygmalion’s Bride (DP IB English A: Language and Literature: HL): Revision Note
This study guide to Carol Ann Duffy’s poem ‘Pygmalion’s Bride’ contains:
Overview
Authorial purpose
Authorial choices and textual features
Themes
Connections to other Duffy poems
Overview
The poem was first published in 1999 in the collection The World’s Wife
The collection consists of poems from the perspectives of women connected to, or reimagined from, famous men in myth, history, literature, film and popular culture
Duffy offers a retelling of their experiences to challenge the dominant male perspective
Pygmalion's Bride is a retelling of a myth from Ovid's Metamorphoses (Book 10), a Roman poetic retelling of a Greek myth set in Cyprus:
In the original myth, the sculptor Pygmalion fell in love with his statue, whom he named Galatea
Aphrodite granted his wish to bring Galatea to life and he married his statue-bride
Duffy retells the story from Galatea’s perspective
Authorial purpose
Duffy’s aim with the collection is to challenge dominant male perspectives and narratives
She offers multiple and complex versions of womanhood
In ‘Pygmalion’s Bride’, the myth becomes an extended metaphor for toxic power dynamics in relationships between men and women:
Galatea feigns indifference in the hope that it will deter Pygmalion’s advances
But Pygmalion is attracted to his bride’s passivity, as he can use her as he wishes
When she feigns interest, enjoyment and agency, he appears to lose interest and discards her
Authorial choices and textual features
Form
‘Pygmalion’s Bride’ is a free verse poem:
The lack of a regular rhyme scheme makes the poem feel conversational and intimate
It reads like a personal account
It has seven irregular-length stanzas:
The last stanza is two lines
It reads like a punchline
The poem is a dramatic monologue giving voice and perspective to Galatea
Structure
The title alludes to the figure in Greek mythology:
The whole poem can be read as a reinterpretation of the original myth from Galatea’s perspective
Or it could be a contemporary speaker using the mythical figures as metaphors for current issues
Caesura emphasises the contrast between the speaker and the sculptor
Language
Pygmalion can be read as an extended metaphor for male desire to dominate:
Accordingly, Galatea can be read as an extended metaphor for women who must navigate issues of dominance, consent and agency
The speaker uses imagery (opens in a new tab)and similes to describe herself as dissociated from the sculptor’s advances:
The semantic field of coldness and purity emphasises this
Colloquial expressions place the speaker in a modern context:
Duffy plays with time and place to highlight the longevity of problematic power dynamics in patriarchal societies
Connotation and juxtaposition combine to emphasise the sculptor’s aggression and Galatea’s repulsion
Duffy uses alliteration, sibilance (opens in a new tab)and assonance to convey contrasting behaviours and attitudes
Examiner Tips and Tricks
Using subject-specific terminology in naming textual features is a useful way to meet strands of Criterion D, Language. Linking these named features to specific impacts on the reader is a good way to meet Criterion B. Linking this analysis of named textual features to broader thematic and contextual knowledge is a good way to meet Criterion A.
Themes
Objectification of women
Duffy’s work can be read in the context of ideas associated with third-wave feminism (see more in Contextual Understanding), which was concerned with challenging sexual power dynamics, assault, abuse and taboos around female desire. In the poem, Galatea’s lack of consent aligns the ‘seduction’ with rape. Her disassociation and attempts to remove herself from Pygmalion’s caresses echo narratives often associated with rape victims. Pygmalion’s increased attraction to her passivity and his desire to harm her highlight a toxic male desire that objectifies women and is attracted to them at best as objects and at worst as victims of their control. Galatea manipulates this by feigning desire and agency in order to repulse Pygmalion. She plays on objectification by understanding that by refusing to be an object, she is no longer desirable. Duffy prompts us to reflect on how embedded layers of these dynamics are in our relationships.
Theme | Quotation | Analysis and interpretation |
Objectification of women | ‘Cold, I was, like snow, like ivory./ I thought "He will not touch me",/ but he did.’ |
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‘He kissed my stone-cool lips./ I lay still/ as though I'd died./ He stayed. He thumbed my marbled eyes.’ |
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‘He brought me presents, polished pebbles,/ little bells./ I didn't blink,/ was dumb./ He brought me pearls and necklaces and rings./ He called them girly things.’ |
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‘He ran his clammy hands along my limbs./ I didn't shrink,/ played statue, shtum.’ |
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‘he squeezed, he pressed./ I would not bruise./ He looked for marks,/ for purple hearts,/ for inky stars, for smudgy clues./ His nails were claws./ I showed no scratch, no scrape, no scar.’ |
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‘My heart was ice, was glass./ His voice was gravel, hoarse.’ |
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‘So I changed tack,/ grew warm, like candle wax, kissed back,’ |
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‘begged for his child,/ and at the climax/ screamed my head off -/ all an act.’ |
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‘And haven't seen him since./ Simple as that’ |
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Connections to other Duffy poems
When studying Duffy’s poetry, it is important to make connections across her work, as many poems explore similar ideas through different speakers and situations.
Power
Duffy explores the power dynamics embedded in patriarchal norms and the culture that comes from them. She seeks to overthrow or at least prompt us to challenge them by offering alternative, female-based perspectives on well-known tales. Here, she examines the power of the speaker to manipulate male desire for passivity. The speaker refuses to be an object, and in overthrowing this role, she reclaims her independence.
‘Mrs Midas’ | ‘Little Red Cap’ | ‘Mrs Faust’ |
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Sources:
Duffy, C.A. (1999) The World’s Wife. London: Picador.
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