In Mrs Tilscher’s Class (DP IB English A: Language and Literature: HL): Revision Note

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Written by: Jenny Brown

Reviewed by: Nick Redgrove

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This study guide to Carol Ann Duffy’s poem ‘In Mrs Tilscher’s Class’ contains:

  • Overview

  • Authorial purpose

  • Authorial choices and textual features

  • Themes

  • Connections to other Duffy poems

Overview

  • The poem was first published in 1990

  • It is about Duffy’s childhood experience in the final year of primary school: 

    • Duffy describes the sense of safety and curiosity in her teacher’s classroom and contrasts this with a sense of impending uncertainty and danger as she grows up

  • She details childhood experiences of learning and growing, and the juxtaposition of the excitement and angst involved in this

  • The poem contrasts innocence and knowledge

Authorial purpose

  • Duffy loved reading from an early age:

    • The power of stories to transport one to other worlds and perspectives is explored in the poem

  • Duffy was inspired and supported by teachers and Mrs Tilscher was a real teacher Duffy had:

    • The teacher’s role of offering a safe and nurturing space to learn and grow is central to the poem

  • ‘Mrs Tilscher’s Class’ was published in Duffy’s collection The Other Country:

    • The collection details literal and metaphorical journeys

    • Like Duffy’s other work, the poem deals with transitions and change

    • She writes about the past as a place to long for

  • Writing in 1990s Britain, Duffy draws on settings and experiences that would be familiar to some readers:

    • Although inspired by personal experiences, the poem also explores universal feelings

    • The details of the school day in the poem reflect typical British primary schools in the late 20th century (e.g. chalk, milk bottles, long pole)

    • The reader can insert themselves into the poem

    • The personal theme about a specific child’s experience in a specific teacher’s class becomes a shared theme about the unsettling process of growing up

Authorial choices and textual features

Form 

  • ‘Mrs Tilscher’s Class’ is a free verse poem:

    • The lack of a regular rhyme scheme makes the poem feel rambling, like a person’s memories

    • The lack of regular rhythm emphasises the complex emotions that the speaker is exploring

  • The poem has four stanzas:

    • The first two are octets (eight lines); the second two are septets (seven lines)

    • The first two stanzas have a slower rhythm than the second two, suggesting the increase of pace and angst as the child grows into adolescence

Structure

  • The speaker repeatedly addresses her child self as another person, ‘you’:

    • This use of a second-person address creates a sense of an adult addressing their younger self with reflection and wisdom

    • It also inserts the reader into the poet’s experience as the reader becomes the ‘you’ addressed, thus, the personal becomes universal

  • Duffy uses contrasting sentence length with caesura and enjambment: 

    • Short sentences suggest the collective learning and sound in the classroom as children recite knowledge: ‘Tana. Ethiopia. Khartoum. Aswân.’

    • Long sentences suggest the unstoppable flow of time: ‘Over the Easter term, the inky tadpoles changed//from commas into exclamation marks.’

  • Internal rhyme emphasises the musical sound of the classroom, with the children and teacher reciting knowledge

Language

  • Sensory imagery conveys the energy and atmosphere of the classroom and playground:

    • This imagery largely creates an impression of the classroom as safe and nurturing, with the ‘gold star’ and ‘scent of a pencil’

    • The learning is presented as an adventurous journey in ‘up the Blue NiIe’

    • The imagery shifts in the latter parts of the poem as the school year draws to a close and the children approach adolescence

    • The ‘rough boy’, ‘jumping and croaking’ children, ‘air tasted of electricity’ give a sense of burgeoning chaos and energy

  • Duffy uses figurative language to convey the layered experience of acquiring knowledge as both exciting and unsettling:

    • The simile ‘The classroom glowed like a sweet shop’ makes the classroom seem magical and knowledge precious

    • ‘The chalky Pyramids rubbed into dust’ is both literal, as the teacher erases the chalk drawing, and metaphorical, as the information slips from the children’s minds as playtime approaches

    • The pathetic fallacy in the final stanza links the ‘feverish July’ and ‘sky split open into a thunderstorm’ with the child’s feelings 

  • Duffy uses alliteration, sibilance and assonance to create a musicality and evoke sensations:

    • The sibilance and assonance in ‘Sugar paper. Coloured shapes’ give a sense of transient sweetness

    • The alliteration and assonance in ‘faded, like the faint, uneasy smudge of a mistake’ make the real dangers beyond the classroom seem fragile and unthreatening 

    • The assonance of ‘enthralling’ in the second stanza and ‘appalled’ in the third links the adjectives and emphasises the contrasting feelings about knowledge

Themes

Transformation

The poem explores how growing from childhood into adolescence involves transforming from a blissful, safe state to one fraught with angst and energy. 

Theme 

Quotation

Analysis and interpretation

Transformation

‘and the chalky Pyramids rubbed into dust’

  • Knowledge itself transforms from certain to ephemeral in the child’s mind eager to play and move on to the next activity:

    • The adjective ‘chalky’ uses sensory imagery to evoke the classroom and blackboard

    • The use of ‘chalky’ and ‘dust’ conveys a sense of materials that are easy to erase, blow away

    • We have a sense of things changing over time, even something solid like the Pyramids

‘Brady and Hindley//faded, like the faint, uneasy smudge of a mistake.’

  • Similarly, the scary knowledge of Brady and Hindley is transformed into something dismissed and transient in the safety of the classroom:

    • The allusion is to a couple who assaulted and killed several children and teenagers in Britain in the 1960s

    • The alliteration of ‘faded’ and ‘faint’ combined with the connotation of ‘smudge’ makes them seem insignificant and easily erased from the mind

    • In the safety of the primary classroom, the child can ignore the dangers lurking in the real world

    • However, the ‘uneasy smudge’ suggests the fear is transformed in the classroom but not erased

‘Over the Easter term, the inky tadpoles changed//from commas into exclamation marks.’

  • The imagery of the transformation of the tadpoles echoes the transformation of the growing children:

    • Easter is symbolic of change in the Christian faith

    • The imagery of the’ inky tadpoles’ links school imagery with nature

    • The metaphor of them changing ‘from commas’, which are small punctuation marks that indicate a slight pause, ‘into exclamation marks’, which are tall and used to show surprise and emotion, hints at the transformation in the children from small and calm to gangly and angst-ridden 

‘The scent of a pencil slowly, carefully, shaved…The laugh of a bell’

‘jumping and croaking//away from the lunch queue…A tangible alarm’

  • The poem juxtaposes the time before and during the transformation:

    • In these pairs of lines, the imagery and connotations present a transformation from calm, intentional comforting behaviour to noisy, unsettling and disordered behaviour

    • The children and life are becoming unruly and unpredictable

‘That feverish July, the air tasted of electricity.
A tangible alarm made you always untidy, hot,
fractious under the heavy, sexy sky…
You ran through the gates, impatient to be grown,
as the sky split open into a thunderstorm.’

  • The final stanza is replete with connotations of change as the child finishes primary school to embark upon adolescence:

    • The pathetic fallacy in ‘feverish July’ and the ‘sky split open into a thunderstorm’ suggest forceful changes and surging energy

    • Electricity and alarms are energy-filled and signal changes

    • The running ‘through the gates’ is a symbolic move from one phase into a new one

    • The child is described as untidy, hot, fractious, running and impatient to give a sense of the impact of the transformation  

Loss of innocence

Duffy explores the loss of innocence that every child experiences growing up. She presents childhood as a precious time in the past to be looked at fondly and with a kind of nostalgia. Growing up is presented as a kind of journey with stages through seasons. Although the loss of innocence is inevitable and natural, Duffy portrays it as fraught with angst and risk.

Theme

Quotation

Analysis and interpretation

Loss of innocence

‘The laugh of a bell swung by a running child.’

  • The first stanza offers a glimpse of uncomplicated, innocent childhood:

    • The sensory imagery of a laughing bell and running child suggests joy and energy

‘Enthralling books…but stared
at your parents, appalled, when you got back home.’

  • The juxtaposition of the child’s attitude to knowledge in the early part of the poem with their reaction to it in the third stanza explores the loss of innocence with humour and pathos:

    • Enthralled and appalled are linked through assonance but contrasted in connotation

‘The classroom glowed like a sweet shop.//
Sugar paper. Coloured shapes.’

  • The imagery, sibilance, assonance and minor sentences here combine to create a sense of a transient sweetness:

    • The child’s perspective imbues the classroom with colour and magic

    • Innocence cannot last in the poem

‘Brady and Hindley//faded, like the faint, uneasy smudge of a mistake.’

  • The allusion to the real world beyond the classroom suggests innocence can be lost all too quickly:

    • Brady and Hindley’s victims were children, so they metaphorically murdered innocence

    • The connotation of uneasy smudge suggests a creeping loss of innocence when faced with the cruelty of the world

‘A rough boy//told you how you were born. You kicked him.’

  • The child encounters knowledge of the adult world:

    • The connotation of rough, the caesura and the physical reaction suggest a jarring loss of innocence 

‘A tangible alarm made you always untidy, hot,//
fractious under the heavy, sexy sky.’

  • The transition to adolescence is captured here as a natural but unsettling loss of innocence and ease:

    • The listing of the adjectives paired with the alliteration emphasises the overwhelming and complex feelings 

    • The pathetic fallacy links the child to the sky so that the changes to the child and the weather are natural but foreshadow more change to come

‘You asked her//how you were born and Mrs Tilscher smiled,//then turned away.’

  • The image of Mrs Tilscher turning away is indicative of the end of a chapter of innocence:

    • In the first stanza, the teacher is a constant presence providing enthralling knowledge, praise and love

    • By the fourth stanza, her physical action symbolises the end of her role in the children’s lives

‘You ran through the gates, impatient to be grown,
as the sky split open into a thunderstorm.’

  • The close of the poem suggests the loss of innocence is natural and chosen:

    • The act of running through the gates symbolises the crossing of a threshold as the child leaves behind the innocence of childhood

    • The image of the sky reappears, and as it was linked to the child at the start of the stanza, we can infer the same linking here

    • The thunderstorm symbolises the burgeoning energy, force and potential danger the child embodies

Connections to other Duffy poems

When studying Duffy’s poetry, it is important to make connections across her work, as many poems explore similar ideas through different speakers and situations.


Change

Postmodernist poetry is interested in fractured selves, plurality and identity that is not fixed. Duffy frequently explores how the self transforms through life experiences. Duffy often compares a complicated present with a more favourable past. The past becomes a place longed for. Frequently, the loss of youth is paired with a loss of beauty, joy or love. However, she complicates this by presenting her changed speakers as more full of knowledge and understanding of themselves; change in Duffy’s poetry is sometimes painful but also empowering. 

Here she explores the universal transformation that occurs to one’s body, behaviour and engagement with the world in the move from childhood to adolescence. By drawing on her own experiences and presenting events through the perspective of an individual speaker, she allows the reader to access the character’s thoughts and emotions directly. This helps reveal how people interpret moments of change, loss or personal transformation

‘Originally’

‘Medusa’

‘Before You Were Mine’

  • The adult speaker reflects on her childhood migration from Scotland to England

  • The move triggers a transformation in the child’s sense of self

  • The speaker reflects on how the move changed her sense of belonging

  • This reflective viewpoint highlights how time and maturity can deepen understanding of past transformative experiences

  • Duffy presents the intense perspective of a woman transformed by rage


  • The speaker imagines her mother’s life before she was born

  • The poem considers how motherhood transformed her mother’s identity

Sources:

‘Mrs Tilscher’s Class’ by Carol Ann Duffy (https://www.scottishpoetrylibrary.org.uk/poem/in-mrs-tilschers-class/ (opens in a new tab))

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